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Petey
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since 2002-12-16
Posts 27
Idaho, USA

0 posted 2003-01-01 10:13 PM


Pain Killer

Since when was I?
When was I not allowed to like her?
To me that doesn't soud right.
I wish she never knew.
I'm all torn up inside,
I thought I had to tell her.
But I was not elite in her sight.
Someone please give me a pain killer...

Don't tell me now,
I'll keep my mouth shut this time.
I didn't want her to know.
To her my esteem isn't worth a dime.
I don't got what it takes to thrill her.
But she tells me off and it hurts.
Hurts so bad I need a pain killer...

-Petey

Those who live by the sword, get shot by those who don't.

© Copyright 2003 Petey - All Rights Reserved
LTEvans
Member
since 2002-12-06
Posts 72
Lenham, England
1 posted 2003-01-02 02:03 AM


Intresting poem!  I quite liked this

WinterWren
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since 2002-12-01
Posts 1044
...Coming to
2 posted 2003-01-02 01:19 PM


That was very good! I liked this poem lots. Hope everything gets better for you, and someone gives you a pain killer.

WinterWren
"I want you to believe in life. Will you find out who you are too late, to change?" -Dishwalla-

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