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mindy
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since 2002-12-18
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VA, US

0 posted 2002-12-31 01:19 PM


Unwilling Time

Time will heal my dying heart…
Time will tell me where to start…
I can't go on living in this lie…
I can't go on trying not to cry…
I will not live my life in denial…
Although that is how it's been for a while…
I can't take it any longer…
I must move on; I must be stronger…
I will not act as though it will be okay…
I'll have proof of his love every day…
And if he can not dedicate his heart to me…
That will be the time that I shall see…
That there is a better life out there for me…
And that I have to unwillingly let him be…

By,
mindy

© Copyright 2002 Melinda Renee Lamm - All Rights Reserved
CloudedDreams
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since 2002-11-23
Posts 210
My Fantasy Realm
1 posted 2002-12-31 01:26 PM


This is really nice. It is really sad though....Hope things get better! have a nice day!

Stinky Twinkie
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since 2002-11-26
Posts 204
Dinwiddie
2 posted 2002-12-31 01:47 PM


Mindy, I'm gonna drool on you again the first day we get back to school...jk. All jokes aside, this was pretty darn deep and good.  It really seemed to express your feelings really well.  I'll give you an A-.


-Stinky Twinkie is Mindy's chef-

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