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foreverwithyou
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since 2002-10-20
Posts 204
Wonderland

0 posted 2002-12-31 12:36 PM


I see you on posters.
In movies and books.
I guess I just really
Dig your looks.
I never met you.
You can just be seen.
But through my eyes
You don't seem mean.
I guess it's true
What they say
I fell for the guy thats far away.
I'll never see you
Touch you're hand
Or get from you
A wedding band
But here I am
Now you all see.
I fell for the guy
Who will never love me.


"I am who I am who I am who am I?"

[This message has been edited by foreverwithyou (12-31-2002 12:43 AM).]

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CloudedDreams
Member
since 2002-11-23
Posts 210
My Fantasy Realm
1 posted 2002-12-31 10:16 AM


this is a really good poem. This applies to some of my friend who are in love with poster boys...
devinechild22
Senior Member
since 2002-08-28
Posts 571

2 posted 2002-12-31 03:21 PM


Cathy Cathy Cathy..What are we gonna do with you. LOL
           *Allison*  

"O My love
Please don`t cry
I`ll wash my bloody hands
And well start a new life"
-Good Charlotte

WinterWren
Senior Member
since 2002-12-01
Posts 1044
...Coming to
3 posted 2002-12-31 04:22 PM


This was very good, that happened to me once, yep stupid me. lol. I liked this one alot, very well written!

WinterWren
"I want you to believe in life. Will you find out who you are too late, to change?" -Dishwalla-

OtherSideOfTheMirror
Member
since 2002-12-19
Posts 245

4 posted 2003-01-01 01:59 PM


I like it. It reminds me of a lot of my friends especially after going to see Lord of The Rings... Legolas is now going to marry eight of my friends... :-/. Sometimes though, I think it's easier to fall for the poster boy than deal with a real one.
dinky
Member
since 2002-10-19
Posts 258

5 posted 2003-01-01 03:15 PM


hey,
othersideofthemirror, i must be one of ur friends lol
yea this seems to happen to me alot 2.
good write
~samantha bloom~(lol i wish)


"sometimes i just feel like
quittin i still might
why do i put up this fight?
why do i still write?"

[This message has been edited by dinky (01-01-2003 03:20 PM).]

rOxXbabY391
Member
since 2002-12-14
Posts 71

6 posted 2003-01-01 09:12 PM


This was really cute
I liked it
~*~eMiLy~*~

"I don't think I can make it through one more night. 'Cause how do you answer "What's wrong?" ~ when nothing is right."

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