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devinechild22
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since 2002-08-28
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0 posted 2002-12-30 03:46 PM


Ok this is my funny/bad poem.Sara knows what I`m talking about. It is sorta an inside joke but maybe some ppl will get it..Who knows? Its real title is "Stuck in a Charlie Brown Episode" LOL

I`m sitting at a desk
Colored in by a pencil
My teacher screaming
BLAH BLAH BLAH
Clutching my blanket
Tapping my flat shoes
Waiting for the bell to ring

The Great Pumpkin has come and gone
And the best little tree rotted
I`m stuck here
With a dumb bald kid
In a yellow and black shirt
Telling me to let go
Of my beloved blankie

My name is Linus
I can`t get out
And I hate peanuts

"O My love
Please don`t cry
I`ll wash my bloody hands
And well start a new life"
-Good Charlotte

© Copyright 2002 Allison Colgrove - All Rights Reserved
PoeticGoddessOfDepression
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since 2002-07-02
Posts 439
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1 posted 2002-12-30 03:53 PM


GOOGLY MOOGLY
lol
"dumb but funny none-the-less"?
I like it, it's cute!

(i don't know what my icon is.. i juss picked a number- i'm scared. lol)

~sara

“I make an impact on lives thru truth as well as lies. I overcome ur eyes +leave and etched memory forever.
its my gift, my intentions are only well"

PoeticGoddessOfDepression
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since 2002-07-02
Posts 439
I am everywhere
2 posted 2002-12-30 03:53 PM


ahh! that thing is ugly!
dinky
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since 2002-10-19
Posts 258

3 posted 2002-12-30 10:22 PM


hey,
this was pretty good.
and funny.
~samantha~

"sometimes i just feel like
quittin i still might
why do i put up this fight?
why do i still write?"

CloudedDreams
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since 2002-11-23
Posts 210
My Fantasy Realm
4 posted 2002-12-30 10:24 PM


I really like this!! good job!
foreverwithyou
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since 2002-10-20
Posts 204
Wonderland
5 posted 2002-12-31 12:32 PM


righttttttttttttttttttttt ;-)

"I am who I am who I am who am I?"

devinechild22
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since 2002-08-28
Posts 571

6 posted 2002-12-31 03:27 PM


Cathy- Whats that sposed to mean! *sniff sniff* LOL
Thank you for the replies everyone. I didn`t think anyone would like it except Sara cause it is sort of an inside joke.But thanks anyway.
        *Allison*

"O My love
Please don`t cry
I`ll wash my bloody hands
And well start a new life"
-Good Charlotte

WinterWren
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since 2002-12-01
Posts 1044
...Coming to
7 posted 2003-01-01 12:44 PM


lol that's cute! Inside joke or not, it's a good poem, I really like it!

WinterWren
"I want you to believe in life. Will you find out who you are too late, to change?" -Dishwalla-

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