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Hallucination
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since 2001-03-18
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0 posted 2002-12-30 10:02 AM


" Neva Hada Girl Like U "
( 30/12/02 )
© 2002 Brian Eggertsen, All Rights Reserved

Intro
Neva Hada Girl Like U.
Neva Hada Girl Like U.

Verse 1
You're like mom's home cookin'
There's always room for more,
I love the way you play
Witcha toes when you're bored.
And it's so sweet how you're
Earlips twits when you yell,
You are the story that
I wanna show and tell.

Refrain
Neva Hada Girl Like U,
Feelin' me up like you do,
Knowing when to see me through.
Neva Hada Girl Like U,
I could give everythin' to,
And get back what I give you.
Neva Hada Girl....Like U.

Verse 2
You call me on the phone
Morn' after a great date,
Color me confused but
I thought that was my place.
At the best party hour
We're both sitting at home,
Watching Macaulay Culkin
In the first Home Alone.

Refrain

Bridge
You're everythin'
I'd ever hope you'd be,
I'd ever dream of.
Sweet tastin' vine
The perfect strawbarry,
You I'll always love.

Refrain

Outro
Neva Hada Girl Like U.
Neva Hada Girl Like U.
Neva Hada Girl...Like U.

© Copyright 2002 Brian Eggertsen - All Rights Reserved
CloudedDreams
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since 2002-11-23
Posts 210
My Fantasy Realm
1 posted 2002-12-30 12:37 PM


I love your songs!! each and every one of them is so unique.. this isn't any different! Good Job!
branden726
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2 posted 2002-12-30 01:53 PM


Kinda hard for me to read this since i dont have what seems to be a southern accent or something to that but it cleary seeme like an awesome song.
OtherSideOfTheMirror
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since 2002-12-19
Posts 245

3 posted 2002-12-30 03:38 PM


Wow your songs are so cute!  That one was my favorite of yours so far, most definitely. It kinda reminded me of the song from Aladdin, "Friend Like Me" or something of the sort... but thats just because I'm strange with Disney music... Anyhoo, nice work.
mindy
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since 2002-12-18
Posts 34
VA, US
4 posted 2002-12-31 01:32 PM


That is really cute! The part..."I love the way you play Witcha toes when you're bored."....is adorable....it shows that you really can see the extraodinary sides of this girl.Good work.
NSnaomian
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since 2002-07-22
Posts 232
In my troll closet I be
5 posted 2002-12-31 02:39 PM


I agree, your songs are unique...I love em too. All I have to say.
Yay for you!
Laura

"All that I desire to point out is the general principle that Life imitates Art far more than Art imitates Life."
-Oscar Wilde

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