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WindSong
Member

since 2002-12-23

Posts 313
Long Island, New York

0 posted 2002-12-30 08:41 AM

~I have the toughest time's when it comes to setting clocks on stereos or even trying to plug in a web cam or at least getting it to work PROPERLY! They always win so I thought I'd be funny...Which I don't know if I can with something like this...So this is gonna be stupid, but if you knew who I was, you'd be dying!~

On the phone, I start to fight.
Alone, in my room one late night.
Clock doesn't want to set, computer hates me.
Perhaps a cup of Tea?

A simple task of boiling water
would be like seeing an otter.
They can build and work with technology,
Me? I can't stand biology.

"Attack of the killer 'puters"
I scream as they all beat me in success.
I can't set a damn clock, and he
laughs conspicously.

On the phone, I loose the fight.
Alone,in my room one dark night,
Clock wins, computer wins,
nothing left but a tale spin.

I'll try again, another day.

~*~This one is stupid I know. But hey...I have a lot of dark, somewhat depressing things, SO I decided to try adding humor to my work...Critique in any way..even if it hurts!!Thanks! ~*~

*Mistakes are made, you pay for them, then you do it again.*
~*~Love doesn't make the world go 'round, it just makes the ride worthwhile~*~

branden726

Senior Member

since 2000-09-25

Posts 607
Bay City, MI

1 posted 2002-12-30 01:57 PM

LOL made me laugh its great

WindSong
Member

since 2002-12-23

Posts 313
Long Island, New York

2 posted 2002-12-30 10:52 PM

Thanks...I just couldn't stand the tourment of someting so stupid BEATING ME! lol. thanks!

*Mistakes are made, you pay for them, then you do it again.*
~*~Love doesn't make the world go 'round, it just makes the ride worthwhile~*~

WinterWren
Senior Member

since 2002-12-01

Posts 1044
...Coming to

3 posted 2002-12-31 04:28 PM

It wasn't stupid it was cute! I think I only have 2 or 3 silly poems, and I don't like 2 of 'em, course I don't really like ANY of my work. But the change is good.

WinterWren
"I want you to believe in life. Will you find out who you are too late, to change?" -Dishwalla-

HopelessRomanticGuy
Member

since 2001-08-17

Posts 495
LI, New York

4 posted 2003-01-22 05:45 PM

ROTFLMAO! Lol, I remember that! I'm sorry I laughed at you, but hearing you fight with a clock on your stereo IS rather funny...

Well, this certainly broke my morose mood apart, if only for a moment. I really liked this one!

*~Rich~*

Too strong to give up, to weak to move on....

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