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NSnaomian
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since 2002-07-22
Posts 232
In my troll closet I be

0 posted 2002-12-27 05:47 PM



This morning I woke up
Got dressed and created...
blue oatmeal!
(try it)
The mush tastes great,
but oh does it smell!
It feels quite fun,
and melts on your tongue!
I never make it hot,
room temp is just fine.
The things you can do
    With oatmeal!
     Let's see...
Eat it! (of course)
Throw it too,
Make funny faces and
slosh it through your teeth,
use it as glue,
and clay too!
Makes nice aromatherapy...
if you were a PIG!
The things that come,
    From oatmeal!

The things I come up with some time. I was eating breakfast and got bored in school that day and wrote about oatmeal...how sad! BUT OH SOOOO FUN!

Laura

"All that I desire to point out is the general principle that Life imitates Art far more than Art imitates Life."
-Oscar Wilde

© Copyright 2002 Laura - All Rights Reserved
CloudedDreams
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since 2002-11-23
Posts 210
My Fantasy Realm
1 posted 2002-12-27 08:20 PM


Stinkie Twinkie would be proud of you... lol
nice write

Yes there will be tommorrow, but will you be there to greet it?

Stinky Twinkie
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since 2002-11-26
Posts 204
Dinwiddie
2 posted 2002-12-27 11:25 PM


You are exactly right, I am proud.  My message has finally reached someone else on here.   and


-Stinky Twinkie-

WinterWren
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since 2002-12-01
Posts 1044
...Coming to
3 posted 2002-12-28 12:33 PM


lol. That really brought an image to mind. I liked it. Now Stinky you can't forget that your message already reached me and inspired me to write about a fruit fly.

WinterWren
"I want you to believe in life. Will you find out who you are too late, to change?" -Dishwalla-

Stinky Twinkie
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since 2002-11-26
Posts 204
Dinwiddie
4 posted 2002-12-28 01:21 AM


oh my god, I'm sorry. I forgot about you fruit fly poem.  I do remember it now though. I have a weak mind, so don't hold it against me please.  I guess I have reached 2 people......unless there's someone that I forgot about.

-Stinky Twinkie-

Stinky Twinkie
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since 2002-11-26
Posts 204
Dinwiddie
5 posted 2002-12-28 01:43 AM


Also, and I'm being 100% serious here, how do you pronounce your name?
NSnaomian, I'm really at a loss here.


-Stinky Twinkie-


Match
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since 2002-07-01
Posts 286
Canada Edmonton
6 posted 2002-12-28 02:30 AM


Everyone likes to throw oatmeal Bravo!
NSnaomian
Member
since 2002-07-22
Posts 232
In my troll closet I be
7 posted 2002-12-28 02:38 PM


N. S. Nay - o - me - an
hehe not so sure if you get it but hey..thanks for your replies
Laura

"All that I desire to point out is the general principle that Life imitates Art far more than Art imitates Life."
-Oscar Wilde

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