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Teen Poetry #6

The Thing About Stars

StellarChica
Member

since 2002-07-06

Posts 207
floating down a river...

0 posted 2002-12-26 06:58 PM

The thing that's so captivating about stars is:
Even when they die they still shine bright for you and me.
And I hope that when I die,
I'll still shine bright for you.

Stinky Twinkie
Member

since 2002-11-26

Posts 204
Dinwiddie

1 posted 2002-12-26 07:22 PM

You WILL ALWAYS shine bright for me.....haha jk. This is good. It was short, but a good short. I'm thinking a lot of good stuff but I can't put it into words. This doesn't happen very often. You must be magic or something! Either way, this a great poem, whether you are magic or not.

-Stinky Twinkie likes short poems-

FireInYourEyes
New Member

since 2002-12-20

Posts 9

2 posted 2002-12-26 11:32 PM

hey i liked this a lot...it was very short but it got the message across directtly and was kind of 'in-your-face" (for lack of a better expression). i dont think there is any need to expand on this at all...good work!

Skyfire

Member Elite

since 2000-12-27

Posts 3381
Riding

3 posted 2002-12-27 05:46 PM

Wow. Short, simple, and deep. I like

I'm dangerous when left alone hehehe

*sniff* I've never been abducted by aliens...

vlraynes
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-25

Posts 8229
Somewhere... out there...

4 posted 2002-12-28 01:30 AM

StellarChica~
I love the thought of this...beautiful.
Hugs,
~Vicky
"...until you have read the verse on his heart,
you have not truly met the poet.
~vlraynes

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