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StellarChica Member
since 2002-07-06
Posts 207floating down a river... |
Maybe just this once, Just for tonight, You could let me fall in love, (With or without you...) You don't even have to know who I am. You could just pretend, That empty words, Are really full of emotion. I don't care. You know what? Don't let me fall in love. Maybe you could just rip my heart out, (Let's get on with it..) I could wear the scars of the broken-hearted. Truth is: I can hold my breath and take the pain, Just so long as you know I've fallen for you. You have no obligation to catch me. "It's hard to look in the mirror these days when everyone else has everything you'd rather be."-Saves The Day [This message has been edited by StellarChica (12-26-2002 01:32 AM).] |
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CloudedDreams Member
since 2002-11-23
Posts 210My Fantasy Realm |
this is so SAD ::bursts into tears:: I am sorry if this is really happening. this is very emotional..... Yes there will be tommorrow, but will you be there to greet it? |
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NSnaomian Member
since 2002-07-22
Posts 232In my troll closet I be |
This IS sad!  Thats no fun...*sobs* I'm sorry if that is happening too... Horrible thing that happens today. Great job with this tho! Laura "All that I desire to point out is the general principle that Life imitates Art far more than Art imitates Life." |
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Skyfire 
since 2000-12-27
Posts 3381Riding |
Wow... Too close to home for me to be able to reply very well... The rawness and the emotions you have here are just... wow |
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Cinderelly Member
since 2001-12-31
Posts 189NM, USA |
This poem really hits home . . . Great poem  |
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