The Year It Finally Snowed On Christmas Eve

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Teen Poetry #6

The Year It Finally Snowed On Christmas Eve

StellarChica
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since 2002-07-06

Posts 207
floating down a river...

0 posted 2002-12-24 07:15 PM

Can we go dancing on my roof tonight?
I could watch the snow get caught in your eyelashes,
Maybe the stars would shine a little brighter for us,
So I could be sure not to step on your feet.
I know I'm not all that graceful,
But I hope it's good enough for you,
I hope I'm good enough for you.

CloudedDreams
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since 2002-11-23

Posts 210
My Fantasy Realm

1 posted 2002-12-24 08:08 PM

that is so pretty, romantic, and slightly humerous all at the same time. I like it alot!

haydenjames
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since 2002-02-14

Posts 164
Antigua & Barbuda

2 posted 2002-12-25 11:53 AM

I really enjoyed this..

more of my poems at-> thehayden.org lets-make-love-&-not-war.

OtherSideOfTheMirror
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since 2002-12-19

Posts 245

3 posted 2002-12-25 12:07 PM

omg i love that its so cute and well written... wow that was short but sweet nice job!!!

WindSong
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since 2002-12-23

Posts 313
Long Island, New York

4 posted 2002-12-25 07:19 PM

OMG! This was great! So sweet and flowing. I loved it! Great job! Keep it up!

StellarChica
Member

since 2002-07-06

Posts 207
floating down a river...

5 posted 2002-12-25 09:30 PM

Thanks.

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