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aries_luv_ppl
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since 2001-09-20
Posts 1448
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0 posted 2002-12-22 11:08 PM


As the stars twinkling bright,
With the tempo of the night,
Chorus in the wind
Reminds me in yonder Christmas Eve
A couple tried to seek a place to rest-
But find no doors... no smiles.
The pregnant virgin was called Mary.
Traveling afar, without helps
They had come to a hay where
Where to us a savior is born!
In the first Christmas
Thousands rejected Him,
Yet still many who were blessed
Came before Him and bowed.
Today I wonder whether I rejected Him.
Did I serve my brother and the less?
Did I forgive who wronged me?
And will I ever be able to be forgiving?
Am I seeking Him today,
Or blinded by the cloud above me?
I wonder and ponder...
How beautiful is love.
I need You, Lord.
I need to feel the power of yours.
Would you answer my prayers
And help me to cast away evil and doubts?
Would you give me a thanksgiving heart
And be my Santa in my dreams?
I would love to hear your voices, Jesus.
I would love to be your dear daughter
And sing to you with all my heart.
Would you grant my wishes this year?
I have been a good girl this year...
Well maybe not... but at least...
I get good grade in school...
Can I be your little sister
Who holds teddy bear in pajamas
Waiting for you to read her stories?
Little Girl is not going to bed
Until she hears from You...

Eliza Simmons
~Sometimes when I look back at what I wrote, I don't recognize the 'Me' in the past anymore.


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Stinky Twinkie
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since 2002-11-26
Posts 204
Dinwiddie
1 posted 2002-12-22 11:36 PM


Santa Claus will give you whatever you want. I dont care what anybody says, Santa is real. All jokes aside, this was a good poem.  I enjoyed reading this.


-Stinky Twinkie-

[This message has been edited by Stinky Twinkie (12-22-2002 11:37 PM).]

HopelessRomanticGuy
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since 2001-08-17
Posts 495
LI, New York
2 posted 2002-12-23 09:44 AM


*smiles*  I often wonder those same things myself.  This poem seems like it might make a good song somehow.  Well, i'm not good at those things.  Anyhow, this poem was great, and just in time for the Holidays!  Thanks for the pleasure!

                                                                        -Rich

"You can't hurt meee!!  'Cause I've got on my cheeeeese helmet!"

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