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jennilynn
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since 2002-11-11
Posts 29
here with me

0 posted 2002-12-22 06:57 PM


You've got to choose
Me or her
Do I lose?

Do I win?
I know you know
Cheatings a sin.

You left without a trace.
Where'd you go
Lost in space.

You left me hangin'
Stuck in here
In my head my heart is bangin'

I really love you baby.
Now I'm left her
With just a maybe.

Do you love me?
I need to know,
were we meant to be?

Or is it her
that your heart
Yearns for?

Do I go or do I stay?
Tell me now,
Will you go or will you stay?


Well, those of you that read my last poem (Do You Know?) know that I recently got with a guy that means a lot to me. well tonight I found out that he might still be with his last gf. He told me that he was single. He has left the state for a week, and a friend of mine is asking a friend of his what he knows. So for now I'm just left here hanging, not knowing whether I want the answer to my question. Anyway, now that I've talked up one wall and down another, I'll go. Thanks to any and all that took the time to sit and listen to me complain about my pathetic little life. peace.


~jenni~

"who stepped on your brain?"-my friend Katie

*remember that everything happens for a reason. you just have to figure out what that reaso

© Copyright 2002 Jennifer Rick - All Rights Reserved
OtherSideOfTheMirror
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since 2002-12-19
Posts 245

1 posted 2002-12-22 07:11 PM


Well written. Sorry about the situation... Hope things get better!

Smile Lots
-OtherSideOfTheMirror

CloudedDreams
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since 2002-11-23
Posts 210
My Fantasy Realm
2 posted 2002-12-22 07:11 PM


I am really sorry, stuff like this shouldn't happen to anyone... Hope everything goes alright. Good Luck : :

Yes there will be tommorrow, but will you be there to greet it?

Heavens Tears
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since 2001-03-15
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3 posted 2002-12-22 07:28 PM


Hey, great poem.  Guys suck, don't they?  Well this one isnt worth it if he's acting like that.  I hope that everything works out.  

*Me*
I'm pasting my fake smile back on just to please you...  I always knew Elmer's glue was good for something...

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26
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displaced
4 posted 2002-12-24 04:49 AM


this is sad...I can relate to you here. I've been through it more than once.
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