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With You |
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Petey Junior Member
since 2002-12-16
Posts 27Idaho, USA |
With You Do or die, now or never. If I don't act, I'll live with it forever. Living with the fact, Of never being together With you... All for nothing? Your life to live, my soul to give. The things I did? The words I said? When it's over, where it's all led To an end that's dead. Why is it that no matter how hard I try, my reputations don't die? I thought I had got so far, But to you I wasn't up to par. What do I have to do To let you know I want to be With you...? All for nothing? Life isn't fair. What use is believing in something not there? All the roads send Me to a dead end. Living life never knowing, Reaping what I'm sowing, Emotions ever growing, Not much in life is guaranteed But you're too high above me. -Petey Those who live by the sword, get shot by those who don't. |
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OtherSideOfTheMirror Member
since 2002-12-19
Posts 245 |
"All for nothing? Life isn't fair. What use is believing in something not there? All the roads send Me to a dead end." WoW! That's REALLY REALLY REALLY good. I like it a lot! I especially like that stanza and how you relate it all to a dead end. It's really really good, did I mention that? |
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CloudedDreams Member
since 2002-11-23
Posts 210My Fantasy Realm |
That is so pretty. I want to cry. It really strikes a cord, it pulls at strings too. Great job. Yes there will be tommorrow, but will you be there to greet it? |
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