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foreverwithyou Member
since 2002-10-20
Posts 204Wonderland |
Sometimes i wonder if u see The person staring back at u is always me But im not the kinda girl u want She thinks you're cute But i think you're hot Sometimes i'll look over Sometimes i'll see That you are there Staring straight back at me I tend to look up Or sometimes around Usually our laughs are the only sound Whenever i laugh i look at you Whenever u laugh u look at me too Perhaps this doesnt mean anything at all I'd like to think so But thats a tale too tall U probley know Maybe u don't I should probley go But i've decieded i wont U need to hear this I need to too How do U feel? Tell me the truth Perhaps not the same way Do U feel like i do? Day after day I can only dream But its not as it looks to u Not as it seems Its not just a crush This u dont see It will last much longer And even tomorrow if u broke my heart I would love u still Like from the very start "I am who I am who I am who am I?" [This message has been edited by foreverwithyou (12-19-2002 10:13 PM).] |
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PoeticGoddessOfDepression Member
since 2002-07-02
Posts 439I am everywhere |
"How do U fell?" Fell? lol, i know what you meant, you might wanna fix that. i like this. You said you were asleep when you were writing this? only at the bottom. lol (i'm being honest.) I still like it, but it started to stop rhyming toward the bottom.. but i like it and it's going to my PL!! yay!! memories...light the corners of my mind.... ok, i'm fine. good write! “I make an impact on lives thru truth as well as lies. I overcome ur eyes +leave and etched memory forever. |
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devinechild22 Senior Member
since 2002-08-28
Posts 571 |
This was good man! Bout anyone specific..? You spelt "probably" wrong but maybe you meant to do that..LOL I never know these things..LOL *Allison* "O My love |
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WinterWren Senior Member
since 2002-12-01
Posts 1044...Coming to |
That was a very good poem, I especially like the beginning, it really caught my attention. WinterWren |
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dinky Member
since 2002-10-19
Posts 258 |
hey, this was reallly good i liked it! ~samantha~ "sometimes i just feel like |
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OtherSideOfTheMirror Member
since 2002-12-19
Posts 245 |
HAH so TRUE! nice writE! something i'd ponder before I fall asleep... that kind of daydreaming reality poem... i like i like. keep it going!! -othersideofthemirror |
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foreverwithyou Member
since 2002-10-20
Posts 204Wonderland |
thankz guyz replies mean a lot no allison i did not mean to spell that wrong (never could spell that word  but yea this is about someone specific that put my pillow up his shirt and then hit me in the head with his own pillow(if only i could take that as flirting  but thankz again!!!##CATHY### "I am who I am who I am who am I?" |
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devinechild22 Senior Member
since 2002-08-28
Posts 571 |
Who`s the girl that thinks he`s cute? The one I farted on? LOL *Allison* "O My love |
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foreverwithyou Member
since 2002-10-20
Posts 204Wonderland |
yea That beeper lol J/J but itz that dumb person.... uh thank u!! "I am who I am who I am who am I?" |
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