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xxxnuttyangelxxx
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since 2002-12-06
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New York

0 posted 2002-12-19 06:49 PM



*Don*t waste your life,
living in the past-
you waste away the future,
and moments never last.

*If you*re always looking down,
you*ll never see the sun-
why think negative?
to think you*re the only one.

*Don*t strive on the bad,
look for the better-
you*ll be much happier,
better *now then never*.

*Be optimistic,
and one day you*ll see-
that life turns out whatever you make it to be.

*Life is about heartace, loss and pain,
but if you never lose hope-
you can make it through the rain.

*As long as theirs faith,
and you believe in things you do-
it may be rough at times but you*ll make it
through.  

*Don* take the little things for granted,
and waste your life away-
every morning you have the chance,
to start a brand new day.

*Dedicated to all people who have faith*

© Copyright 2002 Shea - All Rights Reserved
GG
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since 2002-12-03
Posts 3532
Lost in thought
1 posted 2002-12-19 08:32 PM


This is an awesome poem!!!

My Grandma always told me "don't wish your life away."

So often we focus on the pain and the sorrow and the hurt, but we've gotta have rain to get a rainbow.. and we've gotta opem our eyes to see it!

Keep this up, I really loved this.

Always, Alyssa

- And so it was that time stood still -

OtherSideOfTheMirror
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since 2002-12-19
Posts 245

2 posted 2002-12-19 08:54 PM


Uplifting! LOVE IT! thanks for brightening my day!

OtherSideOfTheMirror

rxyfxy04
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since 2002-11-26
Posts 54
lil' town in Virginia
3 posted 2002-12-19 09:20 PM


I had to post on this one because it really made my nite a whoooole lot better!! very good poem and flow.. cant wait to read more!
WinterWren
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since 2002-12-01
Posts 1044
...Coming to
4 posted 2002-12-19 11:48 PM


*Gasp*! WOW!!!!!! That was REALLY REALLY GOOD!!!! I just....Im struck speachless by your powerful words!

WinterWren
"I want you to believe in life. Will you find out who you are too late, to change? -Dishwalla-

Rainbowdust
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since 2002-12-05
Posts 320
Sydney, Australia
5 posted 2002-12-20 05:14 AM


Very true and inspirational.. you must've gone through a lot to have realised all that!
xxxnuttyangelxxx
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since 2002-12-06
Posts 72
New York
6 posted 2002-12-20 07:27 AM


Thank you for all the responses, and I hope it did inspire you. Thank you

much love,
shea

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