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dinky
Member

since 2002-10-19

Posts 258

0 posted 2002-12-19 06:19 PM

I dont know what to do,
all i see is the hurt in you
I want you to be like you used to be
so free,young and happy,
not so caught up in her
your heartache no1 can cure
she is the one you love
the one you think that was sent from above
just know,
the pain WILL go away
even if it isnt as soon as today

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hey, this is bout my bro, he has been goin through some hard times w/ this grl so i decided to write a poem bout it

"sometimes i just feel like
quittin i still might
why do i put up this fight?
why do i still write?"

xxxnuttyangelxxx
Member

since 2002-12-06

Posts 72
New York

1 posted 2002-12-19 06:31 PM

quote--

"your heartache no1 can cure"

This line is veryy true. Great poem, I enjoyed it a lot and I hope things get better for your brother if they havent already. keep the good work up

Much love
shea

devinechild22
Senior Member

since 2002-08-28

Posts 571

2 posted 2002-12-19 08:12 PM

Awww sam! This was good and sad..I hope things get better for him..
*Allison*

"O My love
Please don`t cry
I`ll wash my bloody hands
And well start a new life"
-Good Charlotte

foreverwithyou
Member

since 2002-10-20

Posts 204
Wonderland

3 posted 2002-12-19 08:55 PM

this was true sam i also hope ur bro is feelin better that was a good way to express whut U were feelin ttyl bals ska dot
###CATHY###

PoeticGoddessOfDepression
Member

since 2002-07-02

Posts 439
I am everywhere

4 posted 2002-12-19 10:11 PM

You mean Jimenem?
lol.. no, no, that wasn't the right thing to say.

God, girls suck so bad... ahhh!!!
Mandy (her right? lol) always seemed so nice...
I'm sorry. I really Am.
I hope everything get's better.
Good write though, lots of strong lines.

Take care,

Sara

WinterWren
Senior Member

since 2002-12-01

Posts 1044
...Coming to

5 posted 2002-12-19 11:41 PM

That was a VERY good poem, I especially liked "all I see is the hurt in you" Hope everything goes well with your brother.

. And I don't know him, but I know what he's goin through, I've been there. Did you show him your poem?

WinterWren
"I want you to believe in life. Will you find out who you are too late, to change? -Dishwalla-

dinky
Member

since 2002-10-19

Posts 258

6 posted 2002-12-20 04:49 PM

hey,
thx every1 for replyin
i hope my bro feels better soon too.
thx for the support
and i havent shown him this, i dont fell realy comfortable talkin to him bout really emotional stuff but maybe i will
thats a god idea thx
and again thx to EVERY1 who replied and
merry christmas or if u speak french, joyeux noel
~samantha~

"sometimes i just feel like
quittin i still might
why do i put up this fight?
why do i still write?"

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