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I'm Through
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I'm Through |
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mindy Junior Member
since 2002-12-18
Posts 34VA, US |
I'm through I've tried to think of what I wanted to say to you. But it never comes out the way I want it to. So I looked down deep inside my heart... To try to find where to start. I guess it starts back to that day... When you had nothing to say. You didn't want to talk or work things out. I couldn't even tell you what it was all about. So finally you told me that you didn't want a relationship. And I felt as long as there was no one else, I could deal with it... You also told me that you would always be truthful... No matter what you did, no matter how hurtful... So I agreed, not like I had another choice to make. But I figured that was what I would have to take. I guess this isn't as easy as I thought it would be... Because it doesn't seem you're that truthful to me... You also said that whatever we do, you're not leading me on... But it's the funny the feeling I get afterward, and when you're gone. You've changed now, you're not the same person anymore. You're not the same person that I used to love and adore. So I've gotten it, it's obvious you don't care. You don't call, you don't talk, you're not even there. I think you've moved on now...although you said you didn't want another relationship. But, as many stories that have been told... I wouldn't doubt it...not the slightest bit... I would have done anything for you, this you knew... But it's over with now, I have to say "I'm through" That's what you've wanted to hear all along... You've got to admit it is...ever since what I did wrong. So here's "Goodbye"..."I'm sorry"..."I'm gone." At least not I can't do anything wrong... By, mindy |
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rxyfxy04 Member
since 2002-11-26
Posts 54lil' town in Virginia |
hey girl! good first post!! i really like the emotions you expressed in this.. it got me really involved in it!! and i could relate to it. RxyFxy04 |
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Stinky Twinkie Member
since 2002-11-26
Posts 204Dinwiddie |
Excellent. Excellent. Mindy is awesome, and you're pale like me too. Good poem, I'm threw too...haha. -Stinky Twinkie- |
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roxywrestlegirl04 Member
since 2002-10-29
Posts 74good ole DINWIDDIE |
   NICE JOB....good first post!! i kinda know sorta how you feel...ive been in the situation before!! LIZ live,love,and die...but take RISKS..thatz what makes life worth the living, love worth the heartache,and death the new beginning! |
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stephanie Junior Member
since 2002-11-15
Posts 33 |
hey mindy...great first poem! i loved it! alot of feelings thrown out there and its all so real. im looking forward to reading moreof ur poems. great job <3 crystal |
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