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Teen Poetry #6
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mara
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since 2002-12-19
Posts 4


0 posted 2002-12-19 10:11 AM




Why do people always have the tendency to judge me?
you think you know me, well think again
cause if you look around all people create sin

I just don't understand people sometimes
They tend to assume and don't even get in their minds
They think they know everything about you
and tell your whole life story old and new

I got one more thing to say and ima leave it at this
don't take it as a joke, not even a dis
but you can talk about me or even tell lies on me
but im already what I wanna be
What about u?



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rxyfxy04
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since 2002-11-26
Posts 54
lil' town in Virginia
1 posted 2002-12-19 10:19 AM


hey.. i really like the feelings you show in this one.  Welcome to passions girl!! haha.. goood first post!!!!

RxyFxy04

roxywrestlegirl04
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since 2002-10-29
Posts 74
good ole DINWIDDIE
2 posted 2002-12-19 10:20 AM


Great Job!!.....nice first post...keep it up!!    
          LIZ

Stinky Twinkie
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since 2002-11-26
Posts 204
Dinwiddie
3 posted 2002-12-19 10:22 AM


Great Job.  There is a good message behind this poem.  GOOOOOOOOOOD.  My "O" key broke.

-Stinky Twinkie-

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