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knightlyshadows Senior Member
since 2001-04-14
Posts 791obscured vision |
You make me crawl over silky smoothness of glass. Abbrasive in it's pure reflection of what's locked away inside. I choke on these violet opium clouds that surround. Blocking my view of everything coherent that I take for granted. You stand beside me, alone in your righteous piety. I'm blind to the world by your lustful whispered words of sex and love. I dropped the tie that binds us together; cut free by your prettyness. We severed the hand of family, that perserved itself among us, tho greater than we. eh.. don't think this one is going to make much sense to anyone. But, that's alright. “A single choice can build destinies, or destroy them.” ..You can't fight the tears that aren't coming.. [This message has been edited by knightlyshadows (12-19-2002 03:52 AM).] |
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GG Member Elite
since 2002-12-03
Posts 3532Lost in thought |
I liked this, it was well done. No I don't really get what it means, But I can tell it holds strong emotion. A good write, keep it up. Always, GG - And so it was that time stood still - |
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