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Laney Member
since 2002-12-18
Posts 85Illinois 
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I'm twenty now, what does this mean? No longer can I be a teen? Am I too old or am I too young? Mapping out life is not very fun. I wanna be thirteen, careless and bold. I wanna be fourteen, don't do what I'm told. I wanna be fifteen, re-live my first kiss. I wanna be sixteen, drivers ed I don't miss. I wanna be seventeen, hopeful and free. I wanna be eighteen, the worlds mine to see. I wanna be nineteen, college parties galore. I don't wanna be twenty no more. Twenty is hard, I have to figure out me life is my canvas; what will I paint? twenty is full of responsibilities So don't grow up too fast; just wait. --Alana [This message has been edited by Laney (12-18-2002 09:41 PM).] |
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wvplayernotreally Member
since 2002-11-06
Posts 215yakima wa |
good message...don't grow up to face...i think we all are...thanks " I think I got a tan from the light in which i was basking." |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Laney~ A good message in this, indeed. One should never be in too big a hurry to grow up. It will come soon enough, and with it, all the responsibilities and decisions that life brings. You've expressed it well...nicely done.  ~Vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, |
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CloudedDreams Member
since 2002-11-23
Posts 210My Fantasy Realm |
i still have six moreyears... I really like this poem. Good work! Yes there will be tommorrow, but will you be there to greet it? |
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Smoothy Member
since 2002-12-02
Posts 119The dark side of the moon |
I enjoy being fifteen, but if life gets beeter as I go on, I won't miss it one bit. Good write. Love conquers all, so I must be in a losing battle. |
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