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nosceteipsum
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since 2002-12-18
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i look for a star to the east, a savior

0 posted 2002-12-18 04:08 PM


if i could dream a little dream
and wrap it up tightly
to keep with me forever
i would dream of you
and moments spent together
ill wrap the memories up
in little bits of cellophane
to preserve those precious moments
of pure innocence and bliss
ill hold the times when you were real
and wish it could stay the same
as simple as truth
placed together in one hand
so beautiful and precious
it all ended too soon

[This message has been edited by nosceteipsum (12-18-2002 05:09 PM).]

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nosceteipsum
Junior Member
since 2002-12-18
Posts 11
i look for a star to the east, a savior
1 posted 2002-12-18 05:02 PM


a forgotten note. the entire poem was changed for my own reasons. namely to change the forum.
CloudedDreams
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since 2002-11-23
Posts 210
My Fantasy Realm
2 posted 2002-12-18 05:02 PM


"il wrap the memories up
in little bits of cellophane"

I love that line. If only it was humanly possible, I believe that many people would do the same

Yes there will be tommorrow, but will you be there to greet it?

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