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Darkness
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since 2002-10-17
Posts 202
The place just beyond my eyes, where my spirit flies.

0 posted 2002-12-18 01:38 PM


Open up, a hole in my tranquility
Savage nightmares of murdering humanity
I've seen more that one man should see
Teetering on that old hypocrisy
And I'm leaning on the edge of lunacy

I've gone as far as I can go
There's no room left for me to grow
How could I ever sink so low?
In this end I will fight my greatest foe
But there's so much that I don't know

It isn't your business what I do
Nor is it what I've been through
And I couldn't feel any more blue
I was saved by the dream where I flew
And everything in this world... I knew

We've all been in hole before
We've all Benn depressed and so much more
But in my heart is the deepest sore
Don't think I can settle the score
But if I can't then what’s life worth living for?

I'll live my life and try my best
I'll work hard, and build my nest
At the end of the line, there's a treasure chest?
Most people say that life's a test
It's like I didn't study because I'm so stressed


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BrokenAngel
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since 2002-01-06
Posts 141
Puryear, TN, USA
1 posted 2002-12-18 06:41 PM


I do this every time I read one of your works, I end up at a compleat loss for words.  I can understand how you said life is a test and you didn't study for it because of the stress, I feel the same way myself half or most of the time.  But hey, if it's a test, shouldn't they give us a study guide for it?  Cause it would really be nice if they did.  Or maybe they did and I missed it.  Well, anyways, wonderful write, very heart felt, in my library!!

Read my work and read my thoughts
I'll go back into the night now
---Night Angel

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