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Teen Poetry #6

The Angel's Words

stephanie
Junior Member

since 2002-11-15

Posts 33

0 posted 2002-12-18 10:25 AM

You know that's wrong,
And you know what's right.
So why is it so hard?
Why do you fight?

Look at what's happened!
That should make yousee;
This is not the place for you.
Here you shouldn't be.

You've lost your grandma,
And almost your dad;
These examples aren't good enough?
Why is Rachel so sad?

Her boyfriend was drunk,
And shot her best friend!
If you keep it up
That could be you in the end.

I know you could't kill,
But you could be the one shot;
All these parties you go to-
Drunk drivers and what not.

So many reasons
Why you shouldn't be here.
These parties aren't for you.
Let your mind be clear.

You don't want to make
The wrong choices in life.
So look in your heart;
Just follow christ.

roxywrestlegirl04
Member

since 2002-10-29

Posts 74
good ole DINWIDDIE

1 posted 2002-12-18 10:29 AM

i like this one....especially the last line...nice nice job!! keep it up!!
LIZ

live,love,and die...but take RISKS..thatz what makes life worth the living, love worth the heartache,and death the new beginning!

rxyfxy04
Member

since 2002-11-26

Posts 54
lil' town in Virginia

2 posted 2002-12-18 10:32 AM

hey girl.. you know this poem means ALOT to me!!! keep up the good work.. but you still need to make an ending one!! haha.. love ya i looooooved it!!!

RxyFxy04

Stinky Twinkie
Member

since 2002-11-26

Posts 204
Dinwiddie

3 posted 2002-12-18 10:33 AM

bang bang.....excellent. I went back and read it. Fantabulistic work! I really like the message of your poem. Harrison Ford movies suck. Don't knock me out.

-Stinky Twinkie-

[This message has been edited by Stinky Twinkie (12-18-2002 10:40 AM).]

vlraynes
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-25

Posts 8229
Somewhere... out there...

4 posted 2002-12-19 02:32 AM

Stephanie~
This is quite a powerful write, and I could
hear the voice behind the words.
You've done a great job of conveying a VERY
important message, and I commend you for that.
Excellent job on this.
Hugs,
~Vicky
"...until you have read the verse on his heart,
you have not truly met the poet.
~vlraynes

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