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roxywrestlegirl04
Member

since 2002-10-29

Posts 74
good ole DINWIDDIE

0 posted 2002-12-18 10:10 AM

From the beginning of life till the end of time
No matter what exes I had before
You are the one that will always be mine
You are the one that I adore

You are my morning, you are my night
You are everything inbetween
You make my heart take off in flight
You make me feel like a queen

Yea right!
A guy like this could never be
Make my heart take off in flight
Where is this guy, please let me see!

All my life I've been trampled on
Now I'm afraid to love
In a relationship I'm like a newborn fawn
Trying to chase after a dove

But I've learned to be confident
Life will be great
I just have to be self-sufficient
And learn to rely on fate.

live,love,and die...but take RISKS..thatz what makes life worth the living, love worth the heartache,and death the new beginning!

[This message has been edited by roxywrestlegirl04 (12-18-2002 10:24 AM).]

Stinky Twinkie
Member

since 2002-11-26

Posts 204
Dinwiddie

1 posted 2002-12-18 10:21 AM

This was great, I didn't even read it....but it was good. You spelled "what" wrong in the second line. Thank god for the edit post function.

-Stinky Twinkie-

rxyfxy04
Member

since 2002-11-26

Posts 54
lil' town in Virginia

2 posted 2002-12-18 10:26 AM

hey girl!.. this was good.. but i already told you that!! keep it up.. love ya

RxyFxy04

vlraynes
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-25

Posts 8229
Somewhere... out there...

3 posted 2002-12-19 02:21 AM

roxywrestlegirl04~
This is a nicely written piece.
You are definitely growing in your
poetry, and I'm enjoying your work.
Keep writing.
Hugs,
~Vicky
"...until you have read the verse on his heart,
you have not truly met the poet.
~vlraynes

roxywrestlegirl04
Member

since 2002-10-29

Posts 74
good ole DINWIDDIE

4 posted 2002-12-19 10:18 AM

thanx everybody for the replies....i really am trying to grow in my work!! it is hard but i guess im doin aight!
THANKS!!!!!

WinterWren
Senior Member

since 2002-12-01

Posts 1044
...Coming to

5 posted 2002-12-20 12:26 PM

Your not just doin alright your doin great! I enjoyed this poem, Im sure alot of others could relate to it as well.

WinterWren
"I want you to believe in life. Will you find out who you are too late, to change?" -Dishwalla-

LTEvans
Member

since 2002-12-06

Posts 72
Lenham, England

6 posted 2002-12-20 11:49 AM

I like the last verse it has an almost pleading quality to it. Intresting poem.

Solipsism saves us from the atavism of the Equalitarian.

LTEvans

rOxXbabY391
Member

since 2002-12-14

Posts 71

7 posted 2002-12-20 04:49 PM

All my life I've been trampled on
Now I'm afraid to love
In a relationship I'm like a newborn fawn
Trying to chase after a dove

veryyy go0od!
~*~eMiLy~*~

"I don't think I can make it through one more night. 'Cause how do you answer "What's wrong?" ~ when nothing is right."

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