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Stinky Twinkie
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since 2002-11-26
Posts 204
Dinwiddie

0 posted 2002-12-16 05:21 PM


I haven't posted on here in a while. I'm sure you all missed my "amazing work" .  Well here is some oddball stuff for you to enjoy (or hate, whatever you want).


Mastodon in Mascara

Big, ugly, hairy
far from a fairy
A beast with no chin
Mascara on the eyes
that runs when he cries
its definately my kin
I'm not ashamed, but I am lying
he's proud on the outside
but inside, he's crying


-Stinky Twinkie has made his triumphant return-


© Copyright 2002 Stinky Twinkie - All Rights Reserved
xxxnuttyangelxxx
Member
since 2002-12-06
Posts 72
New York
1 posted 2002-12-16 06:05 PM


your writing always puts a smile on my face.. Good write .. you are a very unique writer =)

shea

vlraynes
Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229
Somewhere... out there...
2 posted 2002-12-21 12:53 PM



Stinky~
This is an interesting piece.
There is more depth here than meets the eye.
I enjoyed the read.
~Vicky

"...until you have read the verse on his heart,
you have not truly met the poet.
~vlraynes

CloudedDreams
Member
since 2002-11-23
Posts 210
My Fantasy Realm
3 posted 2002-12-21 09:32 PM


Always depend on you for something out of the ordinary. Whenever I have block, I know who to ask....I am not sure if that is totally safe or not,,, oh well... Keep it up
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