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Teen Poetry #6

Law of Entropy

LTEvans
Member

since 2002-12-06

Posts 72
Lenham, England

0 posted 2002-12-16 04:06 AM

I seem to have post five poems...
Sorry about that, but have a look at the others if you have time...

Law of Entropy

I must be hearing things,
For you are beginning to make sense,
Beginning I said, not are.

The end of things to come you say,
Begins when reversed the Law of Entropy,
Will be.

Bubble contracts bringing all things back,
Worlds will collide, stardust condensed,
And roils and churns in a soup.

A soup made of stars, of iron and sleep,
Jolting in space not made for all this,
Until it is the size of an egg.

While in burden of most of the cosmos,
The All will implode,
And then shall we be dead.

As I said to you afore,
You are not you at all,
For you are beginning to make sense.

Solipsism saves us from the atavism of the Equalitarian.

LTEvans

Darkness
Member

since 2002-10-17

Posts 202
The place just beyond my eyes, where my spirit flies.

1 posted 2002-12-16 01:38 PM

I have not been here in a while but this was a nice thing to come back to. This was a great poem I loved the references to the stars and space.

Keep writing.

Darkness

vlraynes
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-25

Posts 8229
Somewhere... out there...

2 posted 2002-12-21 12:50 PM

LTEvans~
A nicely written piece here.
This is a thinker and I like that.
Well done.
~Vicky
"...until you have read the verse on his heart,
you have not truly met the poet.
~vlraynes

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