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A home without a wall,
Our haven without ends,
A circle we all call
Our Family of Friends!

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Teen Poetry #6
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LTEvans
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since 2002-12-06
Posts 72
Lenham, England
0 posted 2002-12-15 11:21 PM


Fan Assisted

Firstly life is acid based,
Second that does for me,
You are a sugar whore,
Why does nobody see?

Did you know that I am not,
Quite like it may seem,
Do you ever think about,
The way that we are steered.

Or the way that we are bred,
For food for some other life,
Higher than I dreamt,
Before I paralysed.
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CloudedDreams
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since 2002-11-23
Posts 210
My Fantasy Realm
1 posted 2002-12-18 07:37 PM

This has a bit of a rough flow to it, try to improve that, it has a interesting message, just try to make it go smoother
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