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wvplayernotreally
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since 2002-11-06
Posts 215
yakima wa

0 posted 2002-12-14 02:07 PM



Rainy days and cold nights fill my life
The rain pours with out mercy
You can't see through rain
The rain gets to you, makes your tears flow smoothly
It pierces your skin
Only cover can save me
My cover faded, tattered at torn
I look up, longing to see the sun shine
The sun doesn't shine, no clouds break
My day is overcast, my nights freezing

Rainy days and cold nights fill my life
Its so cold when their is no one to share it with
You lay alone, wondering what happened
You shiver, no arms wrap around you
come and gone many people
but now I am tattered and torn
in the corner, shaking over and over
the cold seeps to my bones
no warmth finds its way to me

rainy days and cold night fill my life


*this isn't the best ever but its cold and raining here, its gets depressing after awhile*

" I think I got a tan from the light in which i was basking."

© Copyright 2002 Malloree - All Rights Reserved
NSnaomian
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since 2002-07-22
Posts 232
In my troll closet I be
1 posted 2002-12-14 02:17 PM


I know what you mean in this one. I love how you gave me a great picture while I was reading this..Good one!
Laura

"I have seen what a laugh can do. It can transform almost unbearable tears into something bearable, even hopeful."
-Bob Hope-

CwboyAtHeart
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since 2001-04-14
Posts 541
Selah, WA, USA
2 posted 2002-12-14 02:21 PM


Probably not one of my favorites from you, but it was still well written.  The imagery you use in your poems is awesome.  lol  Malloree, it might be raining all the time the last couple days, but we've gotten a whole 19/100's of an inch.  Anyway, good write and thanks for sharing.

      - Cody -

Note To Self:  If Pigs Can Fly, So Can I!!!

If someboy laughs at me, does that make me funny or just plain stupid?  

Rainbowdust
Member
since 2002-12-05
Posts 320
Sydney, Australia
3 posted 2002-12-14 06:20 PM


The soul would have no rainbows, had the eyes no tears.

rOxXbabY391
Member
since 2002-12-14
Posts 71

4 posted 2002-12-14 08:11 PM


I loved your poem!!
"Quote" ~>
You lay alone, wondering what happened
You shiver, no arms wrap around you

:-( i kno how ya feel! Keeep on writing!

~>eMiLy<~

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