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folger's life at 2 a.m. |
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Riley 
since 2002-07-18
Posts 1038in the pouring rain 
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shadows dance the waltz along the crowded wall tear silence the world once again we fall to you our hands rise up eyes down to our knees as we talk to you please show me the way to purity from a newborn so tiny and exposed yet stays clean with your power of which i have yet to instill in minds of millions to me how you have blessed and we have rejected you sinners of chains we are myself included to the trails now i fall again blessed to you with a torch high for mercy a smile dances in my eyes for the light is through me i am still searching and endless journey life will take my down its path and i will find it Morning mist clings to my face, and my soul opens up to you...... |
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CloudedDreams Member
since 2002-11-23
Posts 210My Fantasy Realm |
Wow....very, very good. It makes you feel that in all the despair and pain, there is still an inkling of hope, and we are destined to grasp it. Good good! Yes there will be tommorrow, but will you be there to greet it? |
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wvplayernotreally Member
since 2002-11-06
Posts 215yakima wa |
"how you have blessed and we have rejected you sinners of chains we are myself included to the trails now i fall again blessed to you with a torch high for mercy" This was great! thank you so much! This stanza rings so true. Good job! " I think I got a tan from the light in which i was basking." |
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