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dinky
Member
since 2002-10-19
Posts 258


0 posted 2002-12-13 10:45 PM


what's wrong with me,
used to be happy
cant see past you,
it's not my fault,
i aint an adult
they tell me to smile
when all the while,
i am,
it's just not good enough for them
to smile inside,
gotta be on the outside
no one knows
all the pain my face shows
but when you walk by
the smile shines to the outside

"sometimes i just feel like
quittin i still might
why do i put up this fight?
why do i still write?"

© Copyright 2002 samantha rae - All Rights Reserved
Rug_Burnt_Loser
Junior Member
since 2002-12-13
Posts 11
>>o.b.l.i.v.i.a.n<<
1 posted 2002-12-13 10:49 PM


HEY!!!
*laughs at herself*
I'm such a loser!  
ne way.. i like this a lot, it's the first to go into my PL!!
But yea.. i like the last line.. I'm not going to quote it because I'm too lazy to go back and get EXACTLY what it said but yea.. i liked it.

tty soon!!
Good job, domer!

~loser

"In a photo the size of a kiss, a kiss in the shape of a bullet..."
~GlassJAw~
~siberian.kiss~

[This message has been edited by Rug_Burnt_Loser (12-13-2002 10:49 PM).]

dinky
Member
since 2002-10-19
Posts 258

2 posted 2002-12-14 02:26 PM


hey,
lol ur name is hilarious
thx for replyin
ur first reply was to my poem!! yeaa! lol
i still havent gotten another rug burn
but hey what are you gonna do? u know
thx again
~samantha~ (the missing link) member that??

"sometimes i just feel like
quittin i still might
why do i put up this fight?
why do i still write?"

foreverwithyou
Member
since 2002-10-20
Posts 204
Wonderland
3 posted 2002-12-14 02:30 PM


yea so how r u ???? this was good nuff said bals ska dot tty on AIM

"I am who I am who I am who am I?"

devinechild22
Senior Member
since 2002-08-28
Posts 571

4 posted 2002-12-14 04:23 PM


Well since I already read this in science..and I told you what I thought..it has changed..It just gets better and better everytime! LOL..Sara- I have...gym floor burn..not rug burn tho...LOL From slipping in gym..Long embarassing story..LOL
           *Allison*

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