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dinky
Member

since 2002-10-19

Posts 258

0 posted 2002-12-11 08:41 PM

its your voice,
that brings me to this place
a place to hide,
from all the lies
that i tell myself everyday,
hoping that you'll turn my way
I cant have you
so why do i try,
to get you by my side
i hear your name
and realize i'm caught in your game
love you forever,
even though we're not together

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i dont think that this one was really good,it kept jumpin to other stuff in a way but i dont know i just couldnt get it on the paper how i wanted to

"sometimes i just feel like
quittin i still might
why do i put up this fight?
why do i still write?"

foreverwithyou
Member

since 2002-10-20

Posts 204
Wonderland

1 posted 2002-12-11 08:47 PM

I wont lie to u,card just arent my bag,baby!
oh wait oops this is a poem!!!it was really good sam would it happen to be about a certain M??? anyway i am here to talk to about guyz,anything bals ska dot

###CATHY###

"I am who I am who I am who am I?"

[This message has been edited by foreverwithyou (12-11-2002 08:54 PM).]

Smoothy
Member

since 2002-12-02

Posts 119
The dark side of the moon

2 posted 2002-12-11 09:26 PM

I know just how you feel. Literally. The exact same situation. Seriously though, this isn't as bad as you may think.

~Bryan

Love conquers all, so I must be in a losing battle.

PoeticGoddessOfDepression
Member

since 2002-07-02

Posts 439
I am everywhere

3 posted 2002-12-12 06:15 PM

I'm sorry that people suck so bad.
But this poem is something that doesn't suck as bad as the rest of the world. (in fact it doesn's suck at all)
I liked it. It was a truly honest poem. (heehee, get it?)
yea, ne way... i like it, i know how u feels.
tty soon!

~sara

devinechild22
Senior Member

since 2002-08-28

Posts 571

4 posted 2002-12-12 06:25 PM

This was really reallu good man! I would have to say one of your best!
*Allison*
P.S. Who would the certain M be??

ShadyMakaveli
Member

since 2002-08-21

Posts 128

5 posted 2002-12-13 10:11 PM

I'm with the others, good write, sounds like something i would write, maybe not in that style but that sort of message, so i could relate really good, keep it up. and Thanx for responding to my poems.

CloudedDreams
Member

since 2002-11-23

Posts 210
My Fantasy Realm

6 posted 2002-12-13 11:32 PM

your poem was really great. I think that everybody has had an expierence like that at least once in their life. This is something everyone can relate to

Yes there will be tommorrow, but will you be there to greet it?

dinky
Member

since 2002-10-19

Posts 258

7 posted 2002-12-13 11:56 PM

hey,
thx to every1 for replyin
shady- i like readin ur poems! and thx for replyin to mine.
~samantha~

"sometimes i just feel like
quittin i still might
why do i put up this fight?
why do i still write?"

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