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Ina
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since 2000-10-09
Posts 1236
Quebec, Canada

0 posted 2002-12-11 08:20 PM


this poem...you dont have to reply to....im just writing it to explain why im going to do what im planning to do.

MAKING AMENDS

so this is the bottom line
that's okay
I'm not sad
well maybe I am
I have to make amends
i guess i should before
i set the ball rolling
I'm sorry
for
everything
I don't want to feel sorry
after i write this
or guilty
i think i should feel
relieved
and able to move on
to what's next
Life isnt difficult
its living that kills us
everytime
i dont remember whether
i wrote it or someone else
unfortunatly this isnt very poetic
none of my work really has been
people would call this a cry for help
my voice is already hoarse
I cared about people and then
hurt them
but it's ok
I'm sorry
I think ive made some decisions
thats what they seem like
this is hard to say
when you feel like dying
or youre already dead
okay
so the sky is black
and self-pity is out of fashion
leave your guilt and pity
at the other side of this place
good luck with all your endeavors

Regina Levy

"...he lives in his heart, and its a mighty big place to live alone"
Sling blade


© Copyright 2002 Regina Levy - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2002-12-11 10:16 PM


"Life isnt difficult
its living that kills us
everytime"

This hit hard. It's way too true. *hugs* email me sometime, you pretty girl you. Us gorgeous Canadians need to stick together... okay now that I'm dong being a sap...
Anyway, enjoyed the poem... if you need anyone to listen my email's
Skyfire_18@hotmail.com

Avis
Junior Member
since 2002-12-01
Posts 38
Raleigh, NC, USA
2 posted 2002-12-12 04:49 PM


Wow, that's very deep. I'm hoping that my interpretation of this is wrong. I really do. I can't keep away guilt and pity though. It's just not what I do. Maybe it's wrong, but it's me. I'm sorry for everything that you're going through, whatever it is, and good luck to you in YOUR endevours, my friend. Feel free to e-mail me, even though you probably prefer a girl. lemonlover101@hotmail.com

Peace and Love,
~KEV~

IM me at Tempus Vivo

devinechild22
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since 2002-08-28
Posts 571

3 posted 2002-12-12 06:47 PM


This was really good!!
  
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"people would call this a cry for help
my voice is already hoarse"
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This was my fav part! I loved the wording..It was really awesome..
              *Allison*

"Sorry I`m not home right now. I`m walkin in the spiderwebs so leave a message and I`ll call you back."

knightlyshadows
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since 2001-04-14
Posts 791
obscured vision
4 posted 2002-12-13 05:24 AM


rhonda and allison got my first two favourite parts, but this is also..
quote:
this is hard to say
when you feel like dying
or youre already dead

maybe it doesn't seem poetic, but all expressions don't have to be. your writtings always have how you feel in them, as this one does. and that's what i love about them. as always, a great write Regina. Keep posting, and i hope things work out with what this is about.. *hug*

“A single choice can build destinies, or destroy them.”

Getting away, isn't Running away.

"The hurt that you try to hide, is killing me."

ShadyMakaveli
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since 2002-08-21
Posts 128

5 posted 2002-12-13 04:57 PM


Like someone else said this was very deep, i could feel every word of it, and excellent write. thanx for sharing
CloudedDreams
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since 2002-11-23
Posts 210
My Fantasy Realm
6 posted 2002-12-14 01:12 PM


...::speechless::.....GREAT JOB! i really like this work

Yes there will be tommorrow, but will you be there to greet it?

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