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foreverwithyou
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since 2002-10-20
Posts 204
Wonderland

0 posted 2002-12-11 05:28 PM


  this is a very sensetive subject ppl sry if this was too sensetive but anywayz...
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How can you do this?
Why hurt your body?
Look beyond yourself.
Some think it's funny.
That wouldn't be me.
What is so funny about marijuana and LSD?
Answer these questions,
Then maybe you'll see;
You're not only hurting youself,
You're also hurting me.

"I am who I am who I am who am I?"

© Copyright 2002 Cathy - All Rights Reserved
devinechild22
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since 2002-08-28
Posts 571

1 posted 2002-12-11 06:24 PM


OOO..Cathy I really am sorry about that..I know how much it upsets you about that..I hope things get better..
             *Allison*

"Sorry I`m not home right now. I`m walkin in the spiderwebs so leave a message and I`ll call you back."

dinky
Member
since 2002-10-19
Posts 258

2 posted 2002-12-11 08:07 PM


omg!!!
this was sooooooo good
and it rhymed!!!!  
cat boxes!!!!(used in the term meaning this was fantastico!!)
i cant believe it !!
2 sensitive?!?
it was awesome!
private library time!! o yea!
anywayz
this really showed ur feelings and i am always there to talk!! (lol)
but really u can talk to me whenever u need to!(i didnt know what smiley to use so i have always wanted to use this one)
~samantha~

"sometimes i just feel like
quittin i still might
why do i put up this fight?
why do i still write?"

PoeticGoddessOfDepression
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since 2002-07-02
Posts 439
I am everywhere
3 posted 2002-12-12 06:24 PM



That thing and that one guything with those things make me sad.
I like the ending about how it's not only hurting him, but hurting you too.

Now I'm all sad.
I hope all that is clearing up. (i haven't heard about it lately, so I think and hope that it is)
Very good poem though.
I think Sam's brain is maturing, because she too, realized that your poem rhymed. (lol, j/j)
I like it... you expressed what you felt welly. (well-ly.. is that a word?)
lol,
ttyl!
~sara

rxyfxy04
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since 2002-11-26
Posts 54
lil' town in Virginia
4 posted 2002-12-12 08:16 PM


i really like this and can relate to it sooo much.. in fact i have a friend that just does not understand what drugs do to him and this is exactly what iv been tryin to say to him.. would you mind if i showed this to him? with your name on it of course, maybe this will help him realize what iv been tryin to say ... ya know? please let me know.. GREAT poem!!!

RxyFxy04

foreverwithyou
Member
since 2002-10-20
Posts 204
Wonderland
5 posted 2002-12-14 03:01 PM


of course u can show this to him i think that everyone should no whut drugz can do to u!!!!
  thankz all of u!!!!
  ###CATHY###

"I am who I am who I am who am I?"

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