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PrincessNets
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since 2002-10-30
Posts 103
NewYork, USA

0 posted 2002-12-11 09:25 AM



To share your possessions
is one thing.
To share your life
is quite another.
To share your heart
is a whole new league.
To share your soul
is a special dimension.
You share your possessions with your friends,
Your secrets, your clothes, Your house.
You share your life with friends and family,
Your weekends, Your time, Your love.
You share your heart with your boyfriend/girlfriend,
Your family and friends, the people you care about.
Who do you share your soul with though??
Your husband or wife??  Anyone??
The person who sees your soul and doesn't run,
is the one you can trust.
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This is one of my very first poems, so I hope you like it, but if it's not that great... I'm sorry to disappoint you.  I'd appreciate your input... thanks.

© Copyright 2002 Jeanette Gabriele - All Rights Reserved
aries_luv_ppl
Senior Member
since 2001-09-20
Posts 1448
Universal Mind
1 posted 2002-12-11 02:42 PM


good questions. The person we share our possesion, not necessary we share our life with. The person who share life with, not neceessary share heart with, for we all sometimes afraid to get hurt and close ourself from even our love ones. To share soul, interesting... husband and wife don't neccessary share soul, for some couple marry when they don't know what real love is. Real love is when couple has been together for a long time who have known all the good and ungly things about their spouse and still loving him/her. I like your poetry questions.

Eliza Simmons
~Sometimes when I look back at what I wrote, I don't recognize the 'Me' in the past anymore.

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