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World of Rain |
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Spine Grinder Senior Member
since 2000-10-28
Posts 1127Standing In Silence... |
Falling into the depts. Of uncharted territory A mass of swirling hot liquid Surrounds me. Shadows passing over me The sky turned gray And carrion birds Fly overhead. What is this land of devastation? This land of broken life? Skeletons lie around of beings that were Once beautiful. The rain never ceases and the amount of shattered souls is never the same in this torn world. Puritanism: The haunting fear that someone, somewhere, may be happy. |
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Kielo Senior Member
since 2002-02-11
Posts 1109 |
Hmm. Very strong imagery and a great poem. Thank you. I like...  Kielo I know only one thing, and that thing is that I know nothing. |
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Marshalzu  
since 2001-02-15
Posts 2681Lurking |
I really like this peice, It's not as good as some of your other work, but I love the imagery. Thank you for sharing Andrew |
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WinterWren Senior Member
since 2002-12-01
Posts 1044...Coming to |
I liked this poem alot, especially the 3rd stanza. Wonderful work! WinterWren |
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Spine Grinder Senior Member
since 2000-10-28
Posts 1127Standing In Silence... |
thank you, I'm glad you all liked it  Puritanism: The haunting fear that someone, somewhere, may be happy. |
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