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Hallucination
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since 2001-03-18
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0 posted 2002-12-10 07:38 AM


HI all,
So sorry if the title is miss-spelled, but I kinda suck at spelling (Most) words in english. The words in ( CAPS ) are background vocals...It's the same genre as "Jagged Edge & Boys II Men", that kind of stuff...

Best Wishes,

Brian.


"Built Courage"
(10/12/02)
© 2002 Brian Eggertsen, All Rights Reserved

Verse 1
My eyes wet 'em self
As I pack my stuff and leave,
Knowing it's all my fault
You've withdrawed your love for me.
My heart lose selfcontrol
Watching you crack up inside,
Closing the door behind me
Was like getting told you'd died...

Refrain
Built courage and I told,
You said you felt so sold,
It's understandable.
That we're not saveable,
Why we're impossible...
Built courage and I told
And that's the reason why I'm leaving.
To spare you for the pain you're feeling.
Everytime you see me

Verse
Though we were doing fine
I was missing some action
So I found another
Pure physical attraction
Forgot all about you
Sitting at home all alone
How was I to explain
Got terrorfied to the bone

Refrain

Bridge
Made a mistake can't correct it, ( now it's goodbye ).
And I should have detected ( brought too much sigh ).
That it would ruin our plan...I'm so sorry, so sorry.
Should never have covered it up, ( Now it's goodbye ).
I should have bothered to stop ( Brought too much sigh ).
Before it went outer of hand...I'm so sorry...

Refrain

© Copyright 2002 Brian Eggertsen - All Rights Reserved
knightlyshadows
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since 2001-04-14
Posts 791
obscured vision
1 posted 2002-12-14 03:19 AM


what language -do- you spell then, if not english? ^^ *just curious* oo and i love jagged edge, so that makes me like your music even better.

quote:
And that's the reason why I'm leaving.
To spare you for the pain you're feeling.
Everytime you see me

oo situations like this suck.. sorry you've been through something like this.

“A single choice can build destinies, or destroy them.”

Getting away, isn't Running away.

"The hurt that you try to hide, is killing me."

Hallucination
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since 2001-03-18
Posts 419

2 posted 2002-12-14 07:32 AM


Hi, glad you like this one, my first language is Danish...

brian.

CloudedDreams
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since 2002-11-23
Posts 210
My Fantasy Realm
3 posted 2002-12-14 01:21 PM


This is a really great song it has lots of emotions running with it and it expresses so much. Keep at it!!

Yes there will be tommorrow, but will you be there to greet it?

xxxnuttyangelxxx
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since 2002-12-06
Posts 72
New York
4 posted 2002-12-14 01:27 PM


This was a great song..very deep meaning i enjoyed every line of it...good job

shea

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