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Teen Poetry #6

Only In Dreams

Avis
Junior Member

since 2002-12-01

Posts 38
Raleigh, NC, USA

0 posted 2002-12-09 10:13 PM

I am, right now, sitting here,
Crowded yet alone.
No one knows or ever cares
How I'm getting home.

Amoungst familiar faces,
Having fun, or so it seems.
I am, right now, sitting here.
Living only in my dreams.

Written: 12/7/02
Dedication: To wishful thinking and unfortunate deception

Peace and Love,
~KEV~

IM me at Tempus Vivo

xxxnuttyangelxxx
Member

since 2002-12-06

Posts 72
New York

1 posted 2002-12-09 10:25 PM

This was short and simple and it got the point across. This was truely one of my favorite poems i have read b.c i can totally relate to what you have written. Great job and i hope to see much more of your writing.

shea

Kielo
Senior Member

since 2002-02-11

Posts 1109

2 posted 2002-12-10 01:51 PM

You seem to have a knack for getting inside my head.

Another wonderful poem.

Kielo

I know only one thing, and that thing is that I know nothing.

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