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Greeneyes617
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0 posted 2002-12-09 02:29 PM


Forget this!
I'm independent.
You don't like that?
TOUGH!
DEAL WITH IT!
I'm tired of your always on my case,
Always up in my face.
You can't handle the fact that I am growning up?
What a shame, this is reality not some stupid game.
You expect respect and to know everthing
What about me?
Where do I stand?
Shouldn't respect be given equally or is the price to high for this demand?


© Copyright 2002 Malinda C. Duggan - All Rights Reserved
xxxnuttyangelxxx
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1 posted 2002-12-09 03:01 PM


This was a very good piece of work with a lot of feeling contained within it.  Its a good thing to be independent keep up the good work .

shea

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2 posted 2002-12-09 06:37 PM


i liked this, i can relate...good job and keep it up.

Puritanism: The haunting fear that someone, somewhere, may be happy.

Jenn Cirrincione
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3 posted 2002-12-10 08:36 AM


Ahhhhh parents!! Hehe... I hope I'm on target, as I myself have felt just as crappy with my parents before. That whole respect issue...always seemed one-way. I promise you, things get better sometime.
You'll be able to TALK to them eventually. Good job.

Jenn

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Greeneyes617
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4 posted 2002-12-10 01:49 PM


Thanks for your replys. As for eventually being able to talk to my parents.. YEA after I move out. Now my father has started being a real jerk in the mornings.. I know I have given them a fair share of hardships but I feel a lot of this is unneeded. Anyways, thanks again for the replays.  
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