Untitled - pipTalk Forums

How to Join	Member's Area	Private Library	Search	Sanctuary		Login
Main Forums	Discussion	Tech Talk	Mature Content	Archives	A home without a wall, Our haven without ends, A circle we all call Our Family of Friends!

Teen Poetry #6

Untitled

Baby_Angel123
Member

since 2001-10-12

Posts 63
Unity, ME

0 posted 2002-12-08 08:08 PM

When I look in the mirror,

all I can see,

is a girl staring back,

with tears in her eyes.

So full of anger,

and dis pare,

ready to let go,

of all that she has.

A girl with no worries,

but many regrets,

who cries to herself,

because she is scared.

Live Life it it's fullest and if ya got something to say, ya better say it right now, cuz you may not have another day!

[This message has been edited by Baby_Angel123 (12-08-2002 08:12 PM).]

xxxnuttyangelxxx
Member

since 2002-12-06

Posts 72
New York

1 posted 2002-12-08 08:23 PM

This is a very emotional piece. Don't get down on yourself. Enjoy the person you are.
Very well written

shea

dinky
Member

since 2002-10-19

Posts 258

2 posted 2002-12-08 10:00 PM

hey,
i really liked this
i can relate
but this poem was reallllly good!
~samantha~

"sometimes i just feel like
quittin i still might
why do i put up this fight?
why do i still write?"

HopelessRomanticGuy
Member

since 2001-08-17

Posts 495
LI, New York

3 posted 2002-12-08 10:12 PM

Aww.. that was sad... You okay? We all go through confusion and fear like that, but that dosen't make it any better. Well, I liked the poem! It was good! Keep on writin'!

'Rich

"You can't hurt meee!! 'Cause I've got on my cheeeeese helmet!"

Devils Angel 666
Member

since 2001-11-30

Posts 71
CT, USA

4 posted 2002-12-14 11:00 AM

Good poem my babe. The way you were talking about it before I thought the message was going to be worse. Good poem baby.
Love you!

Dan

Baby_Angel123
Member

since 2001-10-12

Posts 63
Unity, ME

5 posted 2002-12-14 03:02 PM

I just wanna say thanks for all ya replies!
~Angel~

Live Life it it's fullest and if ya got something to say, ya better say it right now, cuz you may not have another day!

	⇧ top of page ⇧
All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format.