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Teen Poetry #6

Gone and lost forever-(new to pip)

xxxnuttyangelxxx
Member

since 2002-12-06

Posts 72
New York

0 posted 2002-12-08 08:01 PM

I hold everything inside,
hoping this feeling will subside
Thoughts run threw my head,
I feel as though the real me is dead

My thoughts get jumbled,
I can't tell how I feel,
writing it down is the way I deal

I love many people although its hard for me to show,
It gets me so angry because theirs just so much people dont know

I woke up one day and I disapeared,
now theirs hurt in my eyes,
and im left with so many fears

[This message has been edited by xxxnuttyangelxxx (12-08-2002 08:13 PM).]

dinky
Member

since 2002-10-19

Posts 258

1 posted 2002-12-08 09:49 PM

hey,
welcome to pip!
this was fantastic!
i luv it!
keep writin
~samantha~

"sometimes i just feel like
quittin i still might
why do i put up this fight?
why do i still write?"

HopelessRomanticGuy
Member

since 2001-08-17

Posts 495
LI, New York

2 posted 2002-12-08 09:54 PM

quote:
My thoughts get jumbled,
I can't tell how I feel,
writing it down is the way I deal

How true that is for all of us... *sigh*
Anyway,
WELCOME TO PASSIONS!!
This was a GREAT poem, especially for a first write!
I hope to see what more you can write!
So keep it up!
Later!

Rich

"You can't hurt meee!! 'Cause I've got on my cheeeeese helmet!"

xxxnuttyangelxxx
Member

since 2002-12-06

Posts 72
New York

3 posted 2002-12-08 09:57 PM

Thank you for making me feel welcome . I hope to hear from you again and ill look foward to reading your work.

WinterWren
Senior Member

since 2002-12-01

Posts 1044
...Coming to

4 posted 2002-12-09 03:04 PM

That was a very good poem! Scarey that first line, I have a poem posted here called Held Inside, your 1st line just so reminded me of it! woah!

WinterWren
"I want you to believe in life. Will you find out who you are too late, to change? -Dishwalla-

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