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Spine Grinder
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since 2000-10-28
Posts 1127
Standing In Silence...

0 posted 2002-12-07 05:23 PM



Make sure
You stay clear
Of the people near
‘cuz they’ll make you fear
the sheer
things you love
and hold dear

They’ll take your sanity
And throw it away
And not even care
It don’t matter
What you say
on your mind
they prey
day by day
you'll grow
less
and know
less

That little thought
of giving in
don't let it win
'cuz if it does
it'll get under your skin
drive you crazy
and burrow within

Now listen to me
I paid the price
My love was taken
I was given bad advice
I guess it was my turn
my heart turned to ice
I didn't look back
not once or twice
So let me be precise
and let me tell you something.

Nothing hurts worse
than getting your heart broke
You gotta be strong
you can't choke
you can't let them provoke
that hurt you feel inside
it'll hurt for awhile
like a open cut
but you can't let them see
that you're down on your knees
begging for it to stop
and finally you know
you've reached
INSANITY.

What You Can't Have- You Can't Resist

© Copyright 2002 Staci Weidner - All Rights Reserved
Smoothy
Member
since 2002-12-02
Posts 119
The dark side of the moon
1 posted 2002-12-07 05:30 PM


"A psychotic is someone more neurotic than their doctor". You're good at making the macabre and insane a tangible flow of text.

Love conquers all, so I must be in a losing battle.

Spine Grinder
Senior Member
since 2000-10-28
Posts 1127
Standing In Silence...
2 posted 2002-12-07 07:58 PM


thank u, i'm glad u liked it

What You Can't Have- You Can't Resist

Jaime
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Posts 250

3 posted 2002-12-07 11:48 PM


Sometimes it's only the rambling that makes any sense. I think at those points we're actually listening to ourselves. (behold truth)

i was here

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