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devinechild22
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0 posted 2002-12-06 07:09 PM



I am no ones ex-girlfriend
No breakups clouding my mind
Tears shed for rejection
None for love lost
I am no ones ex-girlfriend
Love is just a game as they say
I am still stuck at START
Never have I been bankrupt or lost my heart
I am no ones ex-grilfriend
That is a fact
I am no ones ex-girlfriend
And that, my friends, is that.

© Copyright 2002 Allison Colgrove - All Rights Reserved
WinterWren
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since 2002-12-01
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...Coming to
1 posted 2002-12-06 07:19 PM


That was a really good poem. I don't know if that's a bad thing or a good thing, that your no ones ex girlfriend.

WinterWren
"I want you to believe in life. Will you find out who you are too late, to change? -Dishwalla-

HopelessRomanticGuy
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since 2001-08-17
Posts 495
LI, New York
2 posted 2002-12-06 07:39 PM


Hmm... I'm not sure I should be glad or sad... cuz that could be a good or bad thing.  When it comes to the poem itself, however, I'm not nearly as confused.  It was great!  I loved it!  I got a friend in the same boat.... 'matter o' fact, he posts right here!  In the Teen Forum! I can't tell ya who it is, thats for him to do if he see's this post!  Shh!  lol

                                                           Rich

"You can't hurt meee!!  'Cause I've got on my cheeeeese helmet!"

dinky
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since 2002-10-19
Posts 258

3 posted 2002-12-06 08:17 PM


'ey yo,
(lol)
anywayz, this poem was ....
FANTASTIC!!!!
i luved it
and that my friends is that(specially that part)
u have to record urself singin the bicycle song for me so i can listen to it!! i am goin crazy , i havent heard it for like 7 hours or somethin!!
this poem was great!
and that my friends is that!
~samantha~

"sometimes i just feel like
quittin i still might
why do i put up this fight?
why do i still write?"

devinechild22
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since 2002-08-28
Posts 571

4 posted 2002-12-06 08:58 PM


Its not just that I`m no ones ex-girlfriend..its that i`m no ones girlfriend either! LOL Well ...Us single ladies ridin our bikes..we r just soo sexy! LOL
Rich- HOOK ME UP!!! LOL Thank you for replyin to my poem! It means a lot! I really like your stuff.
Sam-Im tellin you..tonight i`ll record my beautiful voice that i can distort into sunding like a young boy during puberty for you!! I swear!
          *Allison*

PoeticGoddessOfDepression
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since 2002-07-02
Posts 439
I am everywhere
5 posted 2002-12-06 09:04 PM


It's a good thing that you're no one's ex-girlfriend...being an ex-girlfriend sucks... especially when you remember about how you were the guy's girlfriend, and about how he told his dumb friend Doug that you were, and you kissed in front of him and- oh god, I'm thinking now.
I liked th poem, though.. it was mighty good.
What's this about bycicles??
I'm feeling left out.
God, i'm such a rambler!
This is was a true, honest, beautiful poem.
(don't forget to put a phht! true PHHT honest PHHT beautiful... as mr. ruhs would say)
YOU SHMO-HAWK!!

take care, everything will get better, you'll find a boyfriend, a darn good one too!!!

~sara

devinechild22
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since 2002-08-28
Posts 571

6 posted 2002-12-06 09:16 PM


LOL Sara..You make me laugh! BUt if I am...WHERE WOULD HE BE EXACTLY!?!?!?!
        *Allison*

foreverwithyou
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since 2002-10-20
Posts 204
Wonderland
7 posted 2002-12-07 09:18 PM


oooo this was really good it is ur best yet!!!! CATHY


"ya know when ya walk into an apartment...."
LOL

"I am who I am who I am who am I?"

devinechild22
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since 2002-08-28
Posts 571

8 posted 2002-12-07 09:23 PM


YES MY FRIENDS THAT IS ALL!
         *Allison*

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