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xShUgArHiGhx

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since 2000-09-26

Posts 3150
tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs

0 posted 2002-12-06 05:51 PM

This is like a vent more than a poem i think cuz the poem itself (if you can even call it that) kinda sux...so i guess enjoy!!

You can be a real jerk you know that?
But i guess things dont change.
You cheat on me once,
And i guess u'll forever stay the same.
Sure you improved,
I've gotten over the bumps you've set up in the road.
Nothings stopped me but u and your actions,
Actions speak louder than the words that you've told.
How am i suppose to trust you?
OOooo Look i think she called again,
I may do some untrustworthy things to see if your lying,
But what am i suppose to do if on you i cant depend?
Do you want me to be in your life?
It sure doesnt seem to me like you do.
Why do you have to go and call other girls,
Do you do it to make you feel better about u?

Your breaking my once solid heart,
Your tredding on shaky territory my friend,
All i have to say is to benefit you and me,
Dont do it again.

Standing on the edge of the world
Now I don’t want you to catch me
I want you to let me
Stand up here and walk on my own

[This message has been edited by xShUgArHiGhx (12-06-2002 05:53 PM).]

WinterWren
Senior Member

since 2002-12-01

Posts 1044
...Coming to

1 posted 2002-12-06 06:12 PM

Wow that was amazing, Im sorry for what your going through. :'( Even if that wasnt really a poem it always helps to vent the anger out. Hope everything goes well.

WinterWren
"I want you to believe in life. Will you find out who you are too late, to change? -Dishwalla-

HopelessRomanticGuy
Member

since 2001-08-17

Posts 495
LI, New York

2 posted 2002-12-06 09:19 PM

Hey! Yep, I've decided to drift back through again, and it's nice to know some people will always be here. This was great, poem or not, it always helps to put your feelings on paper. Though to be true, I'd call this a poem, albeit not laden with the latice of structure. I hope you feel better, and, to phrase this differently than usual, if you ever need to vent to a complete stranger, lemme know! LoL!

'Rich

"You can't hurt meee!! 'Cause I've got on my cheeeeese helmet!"

TopGunLauren
Senior Member

since 2000-08-02

Posts 718
California

3 posted 2002-12-07 04:31 AM

This piece is awsome just so you know.Well I haven't read anything from you in a long time and this is just as good as anything you haven wrote in the past. Keep up yhe awsome work I can't wait to read more.
Lauren

branden726

Senior Member

since 2000-09-25

Posts 607
Bay City, MI

4 posted 2002-12-07 03:28 PM

This was very nice. Guy's are jerks Ill admit i can be one myself. Nice write hope things get better.

Smoothy
Member

since 2002-12-02

Posts 119
The dark side of the moon

5 posted 2002-12-07 04:26 PM

Wow. I felt bad for just being a guy after reading this one. Good write.

Love conquers all, so I must be in a losing battle.

xShUgArHiGhx

Member Elite

since 2000-09-26

Posts 3150
tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs

6 posted 2002-12-07 10:31 PM

It seems as though i've effected everyone but him lol...thanks for reading guys and replying. Im glad you like it. I do feel a little better but i need to get my thoughts together as to what im gonna do.

Standing on the edge of the world
Now I don’t want you to catch me
I want you to let me
Stand up here and walk on my own

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