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morgansmiles Junior Member
since 2003-06-11
Posts 25hicksville |
When I’m looking deep inside myself I find nothing but a trace of something My life goes on like everyone else And I am lost inside of this world If I could stop and control it all I would try it in a minute I would make the shallow people Think twice about the things they do And reward those with good judgment I am sure there are people Who would say I am the shallow one And who knows, they might be right But as long as I look through these eyes As long as I live in this body My judgment is right to me Make your own mistakes I’ll make mine myself I would never change myself To please another person Be the person you want to be Don’t be a stranger to your own self Don’t try and think that you know it all The world isn’t known by anyone Forget troubles and problems for just a minute And take time to laugh Don’t hold it in Laugh until you cry Who cares what anyone thinks? It doesn’t matter Live each day like it’s the only one left But pretend it will last forever. The hours in the day go by like weeks But the minutes go by like seconds It all could be over in the blink of an eye And nobody would expect anything If life is so horrible Then why do people fear death? Maybe it is like a release An escape from the thing that everyone hates the most We complain about money and tv School, People, and our parents But if it was all taken away, Would we complain about it being gone? |
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laurie Member
since 2003-05-28
Posts 153canada, ontario |
thats a good question... what would life be like, if we werent here to complain about it? lol. you got a lot of thoughts here. it seemed to flow ok, a little rough in some spots, but not bad, and you hit the philosophy of the question with skill, and understanding. sorry, l think l'm in a philosophical mood.. laurie. good poem, keep posting. welcome to pips.  [This message has been edited by laurie (06-11-2003 09:59 PM).] |
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PrincessNets Member
since 2002-10-30
Posts 103NewYork, USA |
Morgan, Wonderful Poem! Welcome to Passions dear friend. I knew you had talent but that poem was great. I understand exactly what you mean. Love it! Great first post!! -Jeanette- I am a hopeless romantic not because I am hopelessly in love and not because love is hopeless. I am a hopeless romantic because I do not see the hopelessness of love and someday I hope to find true love. [This message has been edited by PrincessNets (06-11-2003 09:58 PM).] |
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