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devinechild22 Senior Member
since 2002-08-28
Posts 571
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My nose begins to tingle My eyes burn and well up I quickly bring my eyes to the cieling "Dont let them see you cry" I try not to let it phase me Push the repeating words in my head away Everyone asks me whats wrong I push them away Annoyed with their stupid questions He said it wasn`t rejection "Just trying to preserve the friendship" To you it isnt rejection It is to me |
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Morgana Le Fay Junior Member
since 2002-10-25
Posts 22 |
Hey, it's his loss. Things generally happen for a reason and turn out okay. It hurts now, but you'll get over it. If this poem isn't about you then just ignore all of that crap.  Good 'n' honest poem (ironically somewhat about hiding).  Jaime "I love the way we communicate. Your eyes focus on my funny lip shape." (T.A.) |
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devinechild22 Senior Member
since 2002-08-28
Posts 571 |
Yes this is sadly about me....Never ask out your best guy friend...Its not a good idea...He will say no because "if you brake up it will ruin the friendship"...o well...its ok...he`s still me friend...  but thats all.*Allison* |
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dinky Member
since 2002-10-19
Posts 258 |
ey' yo, this poem was great!! dont worry bout ___ ur better off not bein his g/f i think, u may think ortherwise, but then who no's maybe it would distort (is that the right word, i like that word) ur friendship. but at least ur friends and the guy will come along very soon, i can feel it!! u just gotta believe!! keep the faith! sing it w/ me, i want to ride my bicycle.....(lol) anywayz this is gettin long. did i say anything bout how great this poem was yet?? well just in case, it is great!! ~samantha~ "sometimes i just feel like |
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devinechild22 Senior Member
since 2002-08-28
Posts 571 |
I WANT TO RIDE MY BICYCLE I WANT TO RIDE MY BIKE!!! LOL I will tape that for you tonight Sam!! *Allison* |
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PoeticGoddessOfDepression Member
since 2002-07-02
Posts 439I am everywhere |
Oh hey there! I'm back, didn't cha miss me!? Me and all my funny replies?? Eh hem.. yea, anyway. Going out and breaking up does kinda 'distort' (lol, sam) a friendship, unless... yea, but I don't want to get into that. But yea... that guy though... he's whory. (spelling??) I mean.. yea, he's a great guy, but he plays FOOTSIE with JULIA in FCS, I mean.. Allison..... come on. Julia? Footsies? You're better off without him. You should try ur luck with That One Guy. OMG... i'm being social.. let's cover it up. Great poem, You expressed all your feelings quite well, and i don't think this is hiding anything at all... but yes... good job, good show!! *high five* Ne way... keep writing.. it helps a little, right?? ~sara |
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HopelessRomanticGuy Member
since 2001-08-17
Posts 495LI, New York |
Aww.. yeah, I had a good friend of mine do that to me a while back... I don't know what possesed me to ask her out anyway. I mean, she's a good friend, but she and me just ain't compatible. I'm just glad now that she realized this then. So ya see? It's not always bad to be rejected, though it hurts, but thats what we're all here for! 'Rich. "You can't hurt meee!! 'Cause I've got on my cheeeeese helmet!" |
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devinechild22 Senior Member
since 2002-08-28
Posts 571 |
BUT HE SAID HE LIKED ME!! *Allison* |
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foreverwithyou Member
since 2002-10-20
Posts 204Wonderland |
hey this was good but i think that u r better off without him too he may like u but saying that he didnt want to ruin being friendz showz that he really carez about u he oviously didnt care for kim and other ppl just a thought CATHY  "I am who I am who I am who am I?" [This message has been edited by foreverwithyou (12-07-2002 09:12 PM).] |
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