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Teen Poetry #6

my invisable world

lingering thoughts
Member

since 2003-05-03

Posts 70
Illinois, USA

0 posted 2003-06-11 06:16 PM

tears building up inside
i thought this feeling was over
trying to talk to you
but you wont listen
using everyway possible
you acted like we were never friends

you think i would give up
get angry and lose the thought of you
instead feelings of depression
come rushing like nothing before
shaky and worn out
theres nothing i can do

trying to find a way out
of all this unbearing emotion
listening to advice
ways to make it better
knowing none will help
i tune it all out

thinking of so long ago
dazing into my invisable world
where everything is how it used to be
images of us
joking coquettishly laughing nonstop
but most of all...
us together again

hey you guys ! i dont think this is the best of mine but it has as much of my emotion put into as my others... so like always, tell me what you think please!!!

*Cassandra

infinite disaster
Member

since 2003-06-01

Posts 69
Illinois

1 posted 2003-06-11 07:37 PM

i like it cassie. i think it's a good poem. i'm really sorry with everything that is going on between u and jimmy. i really don't know what to say. but i know it'll get better soon and u know that u can always talk to me. *hugs*
much love, akie.

RedStoneEB
Senior Member

since 2003-06-08

Posts 772
uk

2 posted 2003-06-12 07:23 AM

hey i liked it really enjoyed reading it sometimes i wish i could write longs one then i tihnk short ones contain as much feelings as long ones anyway keep writing good ones like that and ill keep reading them

my mind is like a dream sometimes confusing

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