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Stinky Twinkie
Member

since 2002-11-26

Posts 204
Dinwiddie

0 posted 2002-12-04 10:41 PM

Your desk is walking
stumbling along, chasing a taco
my flesh is crawling
and bubbling like hot nachos

Your face resembles a stick of gum
steam is rising off my pinky
if only you could experience
the sight of Stinky Twinkie

Poems like this are the result of eating yellow snow. I tell you, it messed me up for a while. It tasted kinda like......nevermind. You don't care what it tasted like.

-Stinky Twikie-

Cathie Arnold
Junior Member

since 2002-12-03

Posts 18
SC

1 posted 2002-12-04 10:43 PM

Nice Job! What a funny poem this is. Thanks for sharing it.

Trista Gale
New Member

since 2002-12-04

Posts 5

2 posted 2002-12-04 10:45 PM

This is a hilarious poem. You did a very good job, had me laughing all the way through. Hope to read more of your work.

roxywrestlegirl04
Member

since 2002-10-29

Posts 74
good ole DINWIDDIE

3 posted 2002-12-04 11:01 PM

dude.......you NUTZ........jk...i loved it...maybe thatz whatz wrong with me.....to much yellow snow.....it ate away at my brain....thanx for the help....layta

WinterWren
Senior Member

since 2002-12-01

Posts 1044
...Coming to

4 posted 2002-12-05 11:11 AM

Your makin me hungry! I always tell people NOT to eat the yellow snow, this is why.

WinterWren
"I want you to believe in life. Will you find out who you are too late, to change? -Dishwalla-

stephanie
Junior Member

since 2002-11-15

Posts 33

5 posted 2002-12-05 11:15 AM

hahaha....travis you are hilarious! its funny how you can write "poetry" and it be so funny. i cant do that. mine ar ealways so serious...thats why i love reading your poems..they always make me laugh! great job i really liked this one!....haha.

Stinky Twinkie
Member

since 2002-11-26

Posts 204
Dinwiddie

6 posted 2002-12-06 11:58 PM

Crystal, you don't have to tell me how that you love to read my poems every time you respond.....unless you really really want to.

-Stinky Twinkie-

stephanie
Junior Member

since 2002-11-15

Posts 33

7 posted 2002-12-07 05:43 AM

ok fine i wont tell you anymore.....i just wont respond to anything else you write....how about that?!...haha

Stinky Twinkie
Member

since 2002-11-26

Posts 204
Dinwiddie

8 posted 2002-12-07 10:10 AM

Suit yourself......jk.

-Stinky Twikie-

branden726

Senior Member

since 2000-09-25

Posts 607
Bay City, MI

9 posted 2002-12-07 03:26 PM

Nice job,

very "different"

Match
Member

since 2002-07-01

Posts 286
Canada Edmonton

10 posted 2002-12-07 03:53 PM

Rockin! Yellow snow's better then brown, great poem

YOUR INSULTS AND YOUR CURSES MAKE ME FEEL LIKE IM NOT A PERSON ~Staind~

Smoothy
Member

since 2002-12-02

Posts 119
The dark side of the moon

11 posted 2002-12-07 04:23 PM

Yellow snow's bad, m'kay?

Love conquers all, so I must be in a losing battle.

Spine Grinder
Senior Member

since 2000-10-28

Posts 1127
Standing In Silence...

12 posted 2002-12-07 08:22 PM

lol good job.

What You Can't Have- You Can't Resist

dinky
Member

since 2002-10-19

Posts 258

13 posted 2002-12-08 02:49 PM

hey,
lol this was reallly good
~samantha~

"sometimes i just feel like
quittin i still might
why do i put up this fight?
why do i still write?"

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