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Chloey
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0 posted 2002-12-04 10:14 PM



it happened today
all over again
we got in a fight
i lost all my friends
i let a secret slip
i didnt mean to
it just came out
i didnt want it to
i was persuaded
she was talkin dis
i told her ur secret
i didnt want this
i didnt want to hurt you
sorry i made you yell
i know it was wrong
my defense just fell


*$*Chloey*$*


I have comfort in the fire and the amber flames!

[This message has been edited by Chloey (12-04-2002 11:48 PM).]

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Riley
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1 posted 2002-12-04 10:19 PM


Hey Chloey....lol feels weird callin u that..anyway..as I have told you...this is pretty good. Ah...gtg...buh bye


Riley

Morning mist clings to my face, and my soul opens up to you......

Chloey
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since 2002-09-29
Posts 74
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2 posted 2002-12-04 11:47 PM


Tanky Tanky Ri!!

        *$*Chloey*$*

I have comfort in the fire and the amber flames!!

WinterWren
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3 posted 2002-12-05 06:09 PM


Very good poem. I hope you showed your friend.
Laugh often, love much, live well

WinterWren
"I want you to believe in life. Will you find out who you are too late, to change? -Dishwalla-

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