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Sweetpoet16m4u04
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since 2002-11-10
Posts 153
Ma, U.S.A

0 posted 2002-12-04 06:09 PM



The Girl in my Dreams!!

Did you ever know that you’re the one I dream of at night?
I would care for and love you the rest of our lives it seems…
All that I would want is to have and hold you tight,
And only then everything in my life would be so right.

Baby you’re the only girl in my dreams
It just feels you won’t ever feel the same.
So I ask myself why?
Why, is it that if I can’t ever be with you I just want to break down and cry?

Of course this can only be one of many crushes,
But are crushes meant to cause my heart to overflow with emotions?
Feelings so strong that you can only give to that special one.
So if you think it’s only a crush on you I’d have to reply with a no.

You’re the girl that’s always in my dreams,
And it will forever stay that way
At least for now it seems,
That is until the day I can make my dreams a reality!!!


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WinterWren
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since 2002-12-01
Posts 1044
...Coming to
1 posted 2002-12-04 07:14 PM


Yeah go for your dreams! Only you can make 'em come true! That sounded a little, hhm. Anyway, really good poem. Im starting to get frustrated by all these people who don't know these other people like them. Not like Im can say I haven't been there.
Laugh often, love much, live well.

WinterWren
"I want you to believe in life. Will you find out who you are too late, to change? -Dishwalla-

Smoothy
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since 2002-12-02
Posts 119
The dark side of the moon
2 posted 2002-12-04 08:01 PM


I know exactly where you're coming from. All of my posts so far have been about roughly the same thing. Maybe that's who WinterWren was referring to? Keep up the good work.
HopelessRomanticGuy
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since 2001-08-17
Posts 495
LI, New York
3 posted 2002-12-04 09:53 PM


quote:
Laugh often, love much, live well.


I like that litle quote, 'Wren!  Anyway!  Wow, it seems You, Smoothy, and I are in the same boat.... I get fed up when people can't tell people like them as well.... yet I'm one of them... on both sides.... LOL.  Well, I've rambled enough.  I really liked this poem!  It was a great write, and I hope to see many more from ya!

                                                           Rich

"You can't hurt meee!!  'Cause I've got on my cheeeeese helmet!"

[This message has been edited by HopelessRomanticGuy (12-04-2002 09:54 PM).]

LadyDracaWolf
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since 2002-09-19
Posts 73
CA
4 posted 2002-12-05 10:27 AM


Go for it! What is life without taking some great risks?

Death is not extinguishing the light;
it is putting out the lamp
because the dawn has come.

Rabindranath Tagore
Poet, Philosopher, Nobel Laurea

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