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Trista Gale
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0 posted 2002-12-04 03:55 PM



A cold lonely winter’s night
can give you such a fright
when the moon isn’t glowing its bright light.

The sounds that encircle you are loud
specially when the evening sky is wrapped up in clouds, and you wish it would all just fade away.

While the fierce wind gives the land its wintry blow, I scurry to the world below, in hope to make
it home before the snow.


© Copyright 2002 Trista Gale - All Rights Reserved
Cathie Arnold
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1 posted 2002-12-04 10:36 PM


Nice job. Keep up the good work!
LadyDracaWolf
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2 posted 2002-12-05 10:34 AM


Welcome to Passions.

Death is not extinguishing the light;
it is putting out the lamp
because the dawn has come.

Rabindranath Tagore
Poet, Philosopher, Nobel Laurea

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3 posted 2002-12-05 01:51 PM


Welcome to passions!!

I hope you enjoy it here I look forward to reading more from you in the future

P.S.-Check ur e-mail for a special greeting

Standing on the edge of the world
Now I don’t want you to catch me
I want you to let me
Stand up here and walk on my own

vlraynes
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4 posted 2002-12-05 02:24 PM



Trista Gale~
I very much enjoyed reading this.
Wonderful introductory post and I hope to see lots more.
Welcome to Passions!
~Vicky

"...until you have read the verse on his heart,
you have not truly met the poet.
~vlraynes

Stinky Twinkie
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Dinwiddie
5 posted 2002-12-06 12:07 PM




-Stinky Twinkie-

HopelessRomanticGuy
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6 posted 2002-12-06 09:52 PM


Wow!  It's like Piptalk is having it's own renaissance!  So many talented people coming and posting anew here each day!  It's great!  And this poem!  I loved it!  I hope to see more from ya!  Welcome to Passions!

                                                            'Rich

"You can't hurt meee!!  'Cause I've got on my cheeeeese helmet!"

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the wonderful land of oz
7 posted 2002-12-10 06:17 PM


good write and thanks for sharing.

welcome to passions.

/jen/

'i don't care if it hurts, i want to have control.  i want a perfect body, i want a perfect soul.'  [radiohead]

clve527
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since 2002-07-08
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8 posted 2002-12-10 07:34 PM


sorry, must say awesome quote there jen....
That song tears me apart everytime.

Casey

[This message has been edited by clve527 (12-10-2002 07:34 PM).]

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